work on sound
its a good idea, the shots of the city were used very well. However for me it was let down by the voice acting. Work on that and you could be on to a winner
work on sound
its a good idea, the shots of the city were used very well. However for me it was let down by the voice acting. Work on that and you could be on to a winner
Thanks for the tips, I do have to work with the total budget of $0 and I do agree the acting was a let down but my next project should be better. I'm also glad you saw the humor in the short to, its a sad ending that leaves you warm instead of a happy ending that leaves you cold (like war films)
it made me laugh
I probably shouldn't think its this good but I found it fucking hilarious. I wasn't expecting the ending and I love the skateboard hitting him in the head. Could be good if you can get the stick animation slicker, closer to xiao xiao but that would be difficult
lol thanx
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