Wyvernn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[terminator test]

cool

needs sound, then it will be a cool animation. Your style of drawing is cool. Someone will probably bitch at you because the lava would burn off all of his skin too, but I'd ignore that. if you can't be bothered with sound then just add music

[Chicago Gangs]

work on sound

its a good idea, the shots of the city were used very well. However for me it was let down by the voice acting. Work on that and you could be on to a winner

Matt399 responds:

Thanks for the tips, I do have to work with the total budget of $0 and I do agree the acting was a let down but my next project should be better. I'm also glad you saw the humor in the short to, its a sad ending that leaves you warm instead of a happy ending that leaves you cold (like war films)

[Madness Avenger]

oh yes

Absolutely awesome, the best Madness movie yet. The improbability drive was excellent, made it different from the other madness films. I like the reference to marshmallow madness too. Very satisfying ending, thats what made it for me.

Excellent, well done

[savage cheese]

really funny

I like this movie a lot, Its really funny, its got a hell of a lot to it with so many different scenes and things. I really like the different accents especially the old northener and the scouser. The only thing that puts this movie down is the terrible recording quality of the voices, they go so quiet you can't here them then go painfully loud so they burst your eardrums. If you can get the volume more consistant and then resubmit this you could get this a much higher rating.

[Talon Episode 1]

looks strangely familiar

its basically good, sound needs working on. It reminds me a lot of Madness Redeemer. You know like the way he uses the silencer at the beginning and that seen with a door at each end and bad dudes in the middle and the lift scene where he hides on the top. Hey and the main guy looks pretty similar except with a coat and sunglasses. I'm being a bit harsh here because there is a lot of it that is very different, I like the close ups of details like reloading the gun and the planning bit at the beginning. Keep it up, improve your sound and make it a bit more original or bastards like me will rape your score

[Skater's Combo]

it made me laugh

I probably shouldn't think its this good but I found it fucking hilarious. I wasn't expecting the ending and I love the skateboard hitting him in the head. Could be good if you can get the stick animation slicker, closer to xiao xiao but that would be difficult

Da-man35 responds:

lol thanx

[To Hell With The Stickme]

CONGRATUALTIONS

Hey do you realise you have the lowest scoring portal entry!!!!!

Keep it up this must take some serious effort..

[Scooby Doo 2]

GOOD GOD!!!

That has to be the most disturbing flash I have ever seen. Completely disturbing. It actually gets pretty intense towards the end. Well timed. Must have taken some time to work out. Is there a moral to this story??

[Bloody DJ]

Dead clever

Like it.. That Rock DJ song seriously annoyed the nation. Really clever piss take of the "contraversial" video. Nice to see Robbie brought down a notch. Especially funny to see that at least one other person has noticed that he dances like a demented orangutang

[Blanco y Negro]

Now that has got a lot of punch

Now that has got a lot of punch. Very powerfull, I especially like the nice cinematic qualitie of the different camera angles. Excellent